wordsmithing

frontend/templates/notification/comment_on_commented/full.txt

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-We thought you might like to know, there are new comments for a book you have commented on. 
+We thought you might like to know there are new comments for a book you have commented on. 
 
-{{ comment.user.username }} on {{ comment.content_object.title }}
+{{ comment.user.username }} on {{ comment.content_object.title }}:
           
 {{ comment.comment }}
 

frontend/templates/notification/comment_on_commented/notice.txt

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-{{ comment.user.username }} on {{ comment.content_object.title }}
+{{ comment.user.username }} on {{ comment.content_object.title }}:
           
 {{ comment.comment }}
 

frontend/templates/notification/pledge_charged/full.txt

@@ -1,7 +1,17 @@
-Message! About {{ campaign.work.title}} 
-(http://{{site.domain}}{% url work campaign.work.id %}?tab=2) something.
-You will something.
+Congratulations!
 
-You will be also something.
+Thanks to you and other ungluers, {{ work.title }} will be released to the world in an unglued ebook edition. {{ payment_processor }} will now charge your credit card.
+
+Pledge Summary 
+Amount pledged: {{ amount }}
+Premium: {{ premium }} 
+
+We will notify you when the unglued ebook is available for you to read.  If you've requested special premiums, the rights holder, {{ rightsholder }}, will be in touch with you via email to request any information needed to deliver your premium.
+
+If you'd like to visit the project page, click here: 
+http://{{site.domain}}{% url work work.id %}
+
+Thank you again for your support.
+
+{{ rightsholder }} and the Unglue.it team
 
-Give ebooks to the world; give income to authors and publishers.  Unglue.it.

frontend/templates/notification/pledge_charged/short.txt

@@ -1 +1 @@
-blurb for {{campaign.work.title}}
+Thanks to you, the campaign for {{campaign.work.title}} has succeeded!

frontend/templates/notification/pledge_status_change/full.txt

@@ -1,7 +1,12 @@
-Message! About {{ campaign.work.title}} 
-(http://{{site.domain}}{% url work campaign.work.id %}?tab=2) something.
-You will something.
+You have modified a pledge that you had previously made to the campaign to unglue {{ work.title }}
 
-You will be also something.
+Your new pledge summary
+Amount pledged: {{ amount }}
+Premium: {{ premium }}
 
-Give ebooks to the world; give income to authors and publishers.  Unglue.it.
+If you'd like to visit the project page, click here: 
+http://{{site.domain}}{% url work work.id %}
+
+Thank you again for your support.
+
+{{ rightsholder }} and the Unglue.it team

frontend/templates/notification/pledge_status_change/short.txt

@@ -1 +1 @@
-blurb for {{campaign.work.title}}
+Your pledge has been modified for {{ work.title}}

frontend/templates/notification/pledge_you_have_pledged/full.txt

@@ -1,7 +1,16 @@
-Message! About {{ campaign.work.title}} 
-(http://{{site.domain}}{% url work campaign.work.id %}?tab=2) something.
-You will something.
+Thank you!  You have pledged to unglue {{ work.title }}.  If this campaign successfully raises {{ campaign.target }} by {{ campaign.deadline }}, this book will be released to the world in an unglued ebook edition.
 
-You will be also something.
+Pledge summary
+Amount pledged: {{ transaction.amount }}
+Premium: {{ transaction.premium }}
 
-Give ebooks to the world; give income to authors and publishers.  Unglue.it.
+Help this campaign succeed by sharing it with your friends.
+
+Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/sharer.php?u=http://{{ site.domain }}{% url work work.id %}
+
+Twitter: https://twitter.com/intent/tweet?url=http://{{ site.domain }}{% url work work.id %}&text=I%27m%20ungluing%20{{ work.title|urlencode }}%20at%20%40unglueit.%20Join%20me%21"
+
+You can also embed this widget for {{ work.title }} in your web site:
+<iframe src="https://{{ site.domain }}/api/widget/{{ work.first_isbn_13 }}/" width="152" height="325" frameborder="0"></iframe>
+
+{{ campaign.rightsholder }} (rights holder for {{ work.title }}) and the Unglue.it team

frontend/templates/notification/pledge_you_have_pledged/short.txt

@@ -1 +1 @@
-blurb for {{campaign.work.title}}
+Thank you for supporting {{ work.title }} at Unglue.it!

frontend/templates/notification/rights_holder_claim_approved/full.txt

@@ -1,7 +1,13 @@
-Message! About {{ campaign.work.title}} 
-(http://{{site.domain}}{% url work campaign.work.id %}?tab=2) something.
-You will something.
+Congratulations! Your claim to {{ claim.work }} on Unglue.it has been approved.
 
-You will be also something.
+You are now free to run a campaign to unglue your work.  If you're logged in, you will see the option to open a campaign at https://unglue.it/rightsholders .  (You can also find this page by clicking on "Rights Holder Tools" at the bottom of any Unglue.it page.)
 
-Give ebooks to the world; give income to authors and publishers.  Unglue.it.
+To run a campaign, you'll need to select a target price and a deadline.  You'll also need to write a pitch.  This will appear in the Description tab on your book's page (https://{{ site.domain }}{% url work claim.work.id %}).  Think about who your book's audience is, and remind them why they love this book -- your pitch is not a catalog page!  We encourage video, audio, and links to make your pitch come alive.  Feel free to email us (rights@gluejar.com) if you need any help with this.
+
+You should also come up with some custom premiums to reward ungluers for supporting your book.  Again, we can help you if you need ideas for what these should be or how to price them.
+
+Finally, think about how you're going to publicize your campaign: social media, newsletters, media contacts, professional organizations, et cetera.  Have a plan for how to reach out to these potential supporters before you launch your campaign.  Your supporters' sense of connection with you and your book is key to your campaign's success.  Again, email us if you'd like help.
+
+We're thrilled to be working with you.
+
+The Unglue.it team

frontend/templates/notification/rights_holder_claim_approved/short.txt

@@ -1 +1 @@
-blurb for {{campaign.work.title}}
+Congratulations! Your claim to {{ claim.work }} has been approved.

frontend/templates/notification/rights_holder_created/full.txt

@@ -1,7 +1,11 @@
-Message! About {{ campaign.work.title}} 
-(http://{{site.domain}}{% url work campaign.work.id %}?tab=2) something.
-You will something.
+Congratulations!  Your Platform Services Agreement has been accepted and you're now an official Unglue.it rights holder.
 
-You will be also something.
+Here's what to do next.  Find your book(s) on Unglue.it.  On the Rights tab of the book page, you'll now see an option to claim the book.  Do this.  We'll follow up.  Once we've approved your claim, you'll be able to run campaigns for the book.
 
-Give ebooks to the world; give income to authors and publishers.  Unglue.it.
+If your book isn't listed in Google Books (which powers our search), you won't be able to find it at Unglue.it.  That's okay.  You can submit your books for inclusion in Google's search results: http://books.google.com/googlebooks/publishers.html .  We can also create a custom page for you; just notify us.
+
+You can also start thinking ahead about what you'd like your campaigns to look like and how you'd like to publicize them.  Some good things to brainstorm: your campaign pitch; any photos or video you can include; compelling premiums you might be able to offer; what you want your target to be and how long you think your campaign should last; and how to share your campaign with your social networks (online and off) and media contacts.
+
+Need help with any of this?  We'd be delighted.  Email us at rights@gluejar.com.  We're thrilled to be working with you.
+
+The Unglue.it team

frontend/templates/notification/rights_holder_created/short.txt

@@ -1 +1 @@
-blurb for {{campaign.work.title}}
+Congratulations! You're now a confirmed rights holder on Unglue.it.

frontend/templates/notification/wishlist_active/full.txt

@@ -2,11 +2,11 @@ Congratulations, you wished for it, and now there is an active Campaign for {{ c
 
 You can help!
 
-Pledge toward ungluing. https://{{ site }}{% url pledge work_id=campaign.work.id %}
+Pledge toward ungluing. https://{{ site.domain }}/{% url pledge work_id=campaign.work.id %}
 
-Tell your friends -- there are handy share options on the campaign page.  There's even a widget you can put on your blog or home page. https://{{ site }}{% url work campaign.work.id %}
+Tell your friends -- there are handy share options on the campaign page.  There's even a widget you can put on your blog or home page. https://{{ site.domain }}/{% url work campaign.work.id %}
 
-Join the discussion: share why you love {{ campaign.work.title }} and the world will too. https://{{ site }}{% url work campaign.work.id %}?tab=2
+Join the discussion: share why you love {{ campaign.work.title }} and the world will too. https://{{ site.domain }}/{% url work campaign.work.id %}?tab=2
 
 Thank you!
 

frontend/templates/notification/wishlist_comment/full.txt

@@ -1,6 +1,9 @@
 We thought you might like to know, there are new comments for a book on your wishlist. 
-{{ comment.user.username }} on {{ comment.content_object.title }}
+
+{{ comment.user.username }} has commented on {{ comment.content_object.title }}:
           
 {{ comment.comment }}
 
 To change your email preferences, visit https://unglue.it/notification/settings/
+
+The Unglue.it team

frontend/templates/notification/wishlist_comment/short.txt

@@ -1 +1 @@
-{{ comment.user.username }} has commented on {{ comment.content_object.title }}
+{{ comment.user.username }} has commented on {{ comment.content_object.title }} at Unglue.it