From 075dfc3c559d010f8c5f942e39a3896fbde4b62f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andromeda Yelton <andromeda.yelton@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 9 Apr 2013 12:31:19 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] altering term 'rights holder' in places where non-RHs are
 likely to encounter it and be confused

---
 frontend/templates/about.html                 |  4 ++--
 frontend/templates/about_main.html            |  2 +-
 frontend/templates/about_wishlist.html        |  2 +-
 frontend/templates/base.html                  |  2 +-
 frontend/templates/campaign_list.html         |  2 +-
 frontend/templates/faq.html                   | 24 +++++++++----------
 frontend/templates/faq_pledge.html            |  2 +-
 frontend/templates/faq_pledge_cancel.html     |  2 +-
 frontend/templates/home.html                  |  2 +-
 .../notification/pledge_charged/full.txt      |  2 +-
 .../notification/pledge_charged/notice.html   |  2 +-
 .../notification/pledge_failed/notice.html    |  2 +-
 frontend/templates/press_new.html             |  4 ++--
 13 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)

diff --git a/frontend/templates/about.html b/frontend/templates/about.html
index 84bdcd85..43ad8075 100644
--- a/frontend/templates/about.html
+++ b/frontend/templates/about.html
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 {% block title %} Everything You Always Wanted to Know {% endblock %}
 {% block doccontent %}
 <h2>About</h2>
-<p><a href="https://unglue.it">Unglue.it</a> is a service provided by <a href="http://gluejar.com">Gluejar, Inc.</a>  It's a place for individuals and institutions to join together to liberate specific ebooks and other types of digital content by paying rights holders to relicense their works under <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> licenses.</p>
+<p><a href="https://unglue.it">Unglue.it</a> is a service provided by <a href="http://gluejar.com">Gluejar, Inc.</a>  It's a place for individuals and institutions to join together to liberate specific ebooks and other types of digital content by paying authors and publishers to relicense their works under <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> licenses.</p>
 
 <p>What does this mean?</p>
 <ul>
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 		<div><img src="/static/images/headshots/amanda2.jpg" class="mediaborder" alt="amanda" /></div>
 		<div class="text"><b>Amanda Mecke</b> is an expert in literary rights management. Before founding her own <a href="http://www.ameckeco.com/">literary agency</a>, Amanda was VP, Director of Subsidiary Rights for Bantam Dell, a division of Random House Inc. from 1989-2003, where she led a department that sold international and domestic book rights and pioneered early electronic licenses for subscription databases, CD-ROMs, audiobooks, and ebooks. She was also a co-leader of the Random House/SAP Contracts and Royalties software development team. Prior to joining Bantam Dell, Amanda ran the New York marketing office of the University of California Press.  While there she served the board of the American Association of University Presses and was President of Women in Scholarly Publishing. Amanda has been a speaker at the Frankfurt Book Messe Rights Workshop, NYU Summer Publishing Program, American Independent Writers conference, and the International Women’s Writers Guild. She has a B.A. from Pitzer College, Claremont, California and a Ph.D. in English from UCLA.  Amanda will continue to represent original work by her literary agency clients.<br /><br />
 
-		Although our founding team will be be playing many roles at once, Amanda will be spending much of her time reaching out to rights holders and identifying works that will attract financial support from book lovers who want to see the ebooks available for free to anyone, anywhere. Her experience in both trade and academic publishing, together with her keen insight into the world of book rights, stood her above a lot of great people who expressed interest in working for Gluejar.</div>
+		Although our founding team will be be playing many roles at once, Amanda will be spending much of her time reaching out to authors, publishers, and other rights holders and identifying works that will attract financial support from book lovers who want to see the ebooks available for free to anyone, anywhere. Her experience in both trade and academic publishing, together with her keen insight into the world of book rights, stood her above a lot of great people who expressed interest in working for Gluejar.</div>
 	</div>
 
 	<div class="outer">
diff --git a/frontend/templates/about_main.html b/frontend/templates/about_main.html
index aeed6ea0..5c5fd3a0 100644
--- a/frontend/templates/about_main.html
+++ b/frontend/templates/about_main.html
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
         At Unglue.it, you can pledge toward creating ebooks that will be legally free, worldwide.  These books have already been traditionally published, but they're stuck: legal restrictions keep you from being able to enjoy and share them.
     </p>
     <p>
-        Unglue.it gets them unstuck.  Authors and publishers decide what amount lets them freely share their books with the world while still making a living.  We raise that fee here through crowdfunding: people like you chipping in.  When campaigns succeed, the rights holders get paid, and they issue a free electronic edition under a <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> license.
+        Unglue.it gets them unstuck.  Authors and publishers decide what amount lets them freely share their books with the world while still making a living.  We raise that fee here through crowdfunding: people like you chipping in.  When campaigns succeed, authors and publishers get paid, and they issue a free electronic edition under a <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> license.
     </p>
     <p>
         What if you could give your favorite book to the world?
diff --git a/frontend/templates/about_wishlist.html b/frontend/templates/about_wishlist.html
index 46ab2b8d..836cfa85 100644
--- a/frontend/templates/about_wishlist.html
+++ b/frontend/templates/about_wishlist.html
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
     	Of course, <span class="ungluer"></span> can't do that, because books are stuck.  Copyright and ebook licensing often make it illegal for individuals, and even libraries, to share digital books.  DRM makes sharing hard.  At Unglue.it, we respect copyright and pay book creators, while enabling book lovers to share their favorite books with everyone.
     </p>
     <p>
-        In short, we get books unstuck.  Authors and publishers decide what amount lets them freely share their books with the world while still making a living.  We raise that fee here through crowdfunding: people like you and <span class="ungluer"></span> chipping in.  When campaigns succeed, the rights holders get paid, and they issue a free electronic edition under a <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> license.  It's like public radio: once donors have covered the station's costs, its programs are free to all.
+        In short, we get books unstuck.  Authors and publishers decide what amount lets them freely share their books with the world while still making a living.  We raise that fee here through crowdfunding: people like you and <span class="ungluer"></span> chipping in.  When campaigns succeed, authors and publishers get paid, and they issue a free electronic edition under a <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> license.  It's like public radio: once donors have covered the station's costs, its programs are free to all.
     </p>
     <p>
         What if your favorite book could be free to the world?
diff --git a/frontend/templates/base.html b/frontend/templates/base.html
index 31dc8744..6f014ae3 100644
--- a/frontend/templates/base.html
+++ b/frontend/templates/base.html
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ Not needed on newly designed home page?
         <span>Help</span>
         <ul>
             <li><a href="{{ faqurl }}">General FAQ</a></li>
-            <li><a href="{% url faq_location 'rightsholders' %}">Rights Holder FAQ</a></li>
+            <li><a href="{% url faq_location 'rightsholders' %}">Author/Publisher FAQ</a></li>
             <li><a href="{% url api_help %}">API</a></li>
             <li><a href="mailto:support@gluejar.com">support@gluejar.com</a>
             <li><a href="{{ librariesurl }}">Unglue.it &hearts; Libraries</a>
diff --git a/frontend/templates/campaign_list.html b/frontend/templates/campaign_list.html
index 372b2398..64be1792 100644
--- a/frontend/templates/campaign_list.html
+++ b/frontend/templates/campaign_list.html
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ location.hash = "#2";
                 </div>
                 <div id="content-block-content">
                     {% ifequal campaign_list.count 0 %}
-                    There aren't any {{ pub_lang|ez_lang_name }} ungluing campaigns active yet.  If you're a rights holder, you can <a href="/faq/rightsholders">start one</a>.
+                    There aren't any {{ pub_lang|ez_lang_name }} ungluing campaigns active yet.  If you're an author, publisher, or other rights holder, you can <a href="/faq/rightsholders">start one</a>.
                     {% else %}
                     {% lazy_paginate 20 campaign_list using "campaign_list" %}
 
diff --git a/frontend/templates/faq.html b/frontend/templates/faq.html
index fd83e7e1..11c5a378 100644
--- a/frontend/templates/faq.html
+++ b/frontend/templates/faq.html
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 <dl>
 <dt>What is Unglue.it?</dt>
 
-<dd><a href="/">Unglue.it</a> is a a place for individuals and institutions to join together to give their favorite ebooks to the world.  We work with rights holders to decide on fair compensation for releasing a free, legal edition of their already-published books, under <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> licensing.  Then everyone pledges toward that sum.  When the threshold is reached (and not before), we collect the pledged funds and we pay the rights holders.  They issue an unglued digital edition; you're free to read and share it, with everyone, on the device of your choice, worldwide.</dd>
+<dd><a href="/">Unglue.it</a> is a a place for individuals and institutions to join together to give their favorite ebooks to the world.  We work with authors, publishers, or other rights holders to decide on fair compensation for releasing a free, legal edition of their already-published books, under <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> licensing.  Then everyone pledges toward that sum.  When the threshold is reached (and not before), we collect the pledged funds and we pay the rights holders.  They issue an unglued digital edition; you're free to read and share it, with everyone, on the device of your choice, worldwide.</dd>
 
 <a id="crowdfunding"></a><dt>What is Crowdfunding?</dt>
 
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ In other words, crowdfunding is working together to support something you love.
 
 <dd>Unglue.it is free to join.  Most of the things you can do here -- discovering books, adding them them to your wishlist, commenting, sharing -- are free too.  If you choose to support a campaign, you may pledge whatever amount you're comfortable with.  Your credit card will only be charged if the campaign reaches its goal price.<br /><br />
 
-If you're a rights holder, starting campaigns is free, too.  You only pay Unglue.it if your campaign succeeds.  For the basics on campaigns, see the FAQ on <a href="/faq/campaigns/">Campaigns</a>; for more details, see the <a href="/faq/rightsholders/">FAQ for Rights Holders</a>.</dd>
+If you hold the electronic rights to a book, starting campaigns is free, too.  You only pay Unglue.it if your campaign succeeds.  For the basics on campaigns, see the FAQ on <a href="/faq/campaigns/">Campaigns</a>; for more details, see the <a href="/faq/rightsholders/">FAQ for Rights Holders</a>.</dd>
 
 <dt>Who can use Unglue.it?</dt>
 
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ If you are a copyright holder, you retain your copyright when you unglue a book.
 
 For some examples of how authors and publishers have made free ebooks work for their business plans, see Cory Doctorow's <a href="http://www.publishersweekly.com/pw/by-topic/columns-and-blogs/cory-doctorow/index.html">columns for Publisher's Weekly</a>, <a href="http://wahoocorner.blogspot.com/2012/01/how-kdp-select-saved-my-book.html">David Kazzie's <I>Jackpot</I></a>, and the <a href="http://www.baen.com/library/defaultTitles.htm">Baen Free Library</a>.  If unglued books are working for you, we'd love to hear your story. Tell us at <a href="mailto:support@gluejar.com">support@gluejar.com</a>.</dd>
 
-<dt>Why do rights holders want to unglue their books?</dt>
+<dt>Why do authors, publishers, and other rights holders want to unglue their books?</dt>
 
 <dd>
 Lots of reasons:<br /><br />
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ If you believe you are a rights holder and would like to discuss ungluing your w
 
 <dt>I know a book that should be unglued.</dt>
 
-<dd>Great! Find it in our database (using the search box above) and add it to your wishlist, so we know it should be on our list, too.  And encourage your friends to add it to their wishlists.  The more wishlists a book is on, the more appealing it is for rights holders to launch an ungluing campaign.  You can also contact us at <a href="mailto:rights@gluejar.com">rights@gluejar.com</a>.</dd>
+<dd>Great! Find it in our database (using the search box above) and add it to your wishlist, so we know it should be on our list, too.  And encourage your friends to add it to their wishlists.  The more wishlists a book is on, the more appealing it is for authors and publishers to launch an ungluing campaign.  You can also contact us at <a href="mailto:rights@gluejar.com">rights@gluejar.com</a>.</dd>
 
 <dt>I know a book that should be unglued, and I own the commercial rights.</dt>
 
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ If you receive our newsletter, there's a link at the bottom of every message to
 
 <dt>Is my personal information shared?</dt>
 
-<dd>Short version: no, except as absolutely required to deliver services you have opted into. If you have pledged to a campaign and are owed a premium, we will share your email with rights holders so that they can deliver premiums to you; you are not required to share any further information and they are required to comply with our privacy policy in handling your information.  We do use third-party providers to support some of our business functions, but they are only allowed to use your information in order to enable your use of the service.  For the long version, please read our <a href="/privacy/">privacy policy</a>.
+<dd>Short version: no, except as absolutely required to deliver services you have opted into. If you have pledged to a campaign and are owed a premium, we will share your email with campaign managers so that they can deliver premiums to you; you are not required to share any further information and they are required to comply with our privacy policy in handling your information.  We do use third-party providers to support some of our business functions, but they are only allowed to use your information in order to enable your use of the service.  For the long version, please read our <a href="/privacy/">privacy policy</a>.
 </dl>
 {% endif %}
 {% if sublocation == 'company' or sublocation == 'all' %}
@@ -201,15 +201,15 @@ If you want to find an interesting campaign and don't have a specific book in mi
 <dl>
 <dt>Can a campaign be edited after launching?</dt>
 
-<dd>Yes.  In fact, rights holders are encouraged to update their supporters about the progress of the campaign. (For an example of exceptionally successful updating, check out <a href="http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/599092525/the-order-of-the-stick-reprint-drive/posts">Rich Burlew's Kickstarter campaign</a>, which grossed over a million dollars, in part because of his frequent and creative communication and improvements to the rewards being offered.)  Note that the campaign's deadline cannot be changed and its threshold may not be increased, though it may be lowered.</dd>
+<dd>Yes.  In fact, campaign managers are encouraged to update their supporters about the progress of the campaign. (For an example of exceptionally successful updating, check out <a href="http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/599092525/the-order-of-the-stick-reprint-drive/posts">Rich Burlew's Kickstarter campaign</a>, which grossed over a million dollars, in part because of his frequent and creative communication and improvements to the rewards being offered.)  Note that the campaign's deadline cannot be changed and its threshold may not be increased, though it may be lowered.</dd>
 
 <dt>Can campaigns be edited after funding is completed?</dt>
 
-<dd>Yes.  Again, while the deadline cannot be changed and the threshold cannot be increased, rights holders are encouraged to add thank-you messages for supporters and update them on the progress of ebook conversion (if needed).</dd>
+<dd>Yes.  Again, while the deadline cannot be changed and the threshold cannot be increased, campaign managers are encouraged to add thank-you messages for supporters and update them on the progress of ebook conversion (if needed).</dd>
 
 <dt>What is a campaign page?</dt>
 
-<dd>When a book has an active ungluing campaign, its book page turns into its campaign page.  This means that, in addition to the standard book page information, it also features rewards for different pledge tiers; a Support button; and information supplied by the rights holder about the book and the campaign.</dd>
+<dd>When a book has an active ungluing campaign, its book page turns into its campaign page.  This means that, in addition to the standard book page information, it also features rewards for different pledge tiers; a Support button; and information supplied by the campaign manager (typically the author or publisher) about the book and the campaign.</dd>
 </dl>
 {% endif %}
 {% if sublocation == 'supporting' or sublocation == 'all' %}
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ If you want to find an interesting campaign and don't have a specific book in mi
 
 <dt>Is my contribution tax deductible?</dt>
 
-<dd>If the rights holder for the work you're supporting is a nonprofit, please contact them directly to inquire.  Unglue.it cannot offer tax deductions.</dd>
+<dd>If the campaign manager for the work you're supporting is a nonprofit, please contact them directly to inquire.  Unglue.it cannot offer tax deductions.</dd>
 </dl>
 {% endif %}
 {% if sublocation == 'premiums' or sublocation == 'all' %}
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ If you want to find an interesting campaign and don't have a specific book in mi
 
 <dt>Who creates the premiums for each campaign?</dt>
 
-<dd>The rights holder.</dd>
+<dd>The campaign manager (typically the author or publisher of the book).</dd>
 
 <dt>Is there a minimum or maximum for how much a premium can cost?</dt>
 
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@ If you want to find an interesting campaign and don't have a specific book in mi
 <dl>
 <dt>So what is an unglued ebook?</dt>
 
-<dd>An unglued ebook is an already-published book that's been rereleased under a <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> license, after obtaining permission and compensating the rights holder.<br /><br />
+<dd>An unglued ebook is an already-published book that's been rereleased under a <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> license, after obtaining permission and compensating the author, publisher, or other rights holder.<br /><br />
 
 What does this mean for you?  If you're a book lover, you can read unglued ebooks for free, on the device of your choice, in the format of your choice, and share them with all your friends.  If you're a library, you can lend them to your patrons with no checkout limits or simultaneous user restrictions, and preserve them however you think best.  If you're a rights holder, you get a guaranteed up-front payment in lieu of royalties on this edition, while retaining copyright and all interests in other editions of your work.<br /><br />
 
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ Unglue.it can't provide legal advice about how to interpret Creative Commons lic
 
 <dt>I love my unglued ebook and I want to loan it to my friends.  Can I?</dt>
 
-<dd>Yes!  Because everything with a <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> license is free to copy and share, you can copy your unglued ebook file and give it to anyone you want.  You can all read and discuss it on GoodReads or LibraryThing at the same time.  The Rights Holder has given you permission to spread the word to readers everywhere.<br /><br />
+<dd>Yes!  Because everything with a <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> license is free to copy and share, you can copy your unglued ebook file and give it to anyone you want.  You can all read and discuss it on GoodReads or LibraryThing at the same time.  The rights holder has given you permission to spread the word to readers everywhere.<br /><br />
 Just don't sell, adapt, or abridge it without checking the license.  All unglued ebooks are licensed for noncommercial uses.  Of course, you're welcome to still buy other editions -- paperbacks, hardcovers, or audio -- too.</dd>
 
 <dt>Will I be able to dowload an unglued ebook directly from Unglue.it?</dt>
diff --git a/frontend/templates/faq_pledge.html b/frontend/templates/faq_pledge.html
index 3495c64f..dbf88fde 100644
--- a/frontend/templates/faq_pledge.html
+++ b/frontend/templates/faq_pledge.html
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
                         <li class="last parent">
                             <span class="faq">How and when will I receive my premiums?</span>
                             <span class="menu level2 answer">
-                            If the campaign succeeds and you requested a special premium, we will disclose to the rights holder your email address and any premiums you requested.  The rights holder will then be in touch with you about how your premiums will be fulfilled.  If you asked to be listed in the acknowledgements, this will be part of the unglued ebook.  We'll email you a link to it within 90 days of the close of the campaign.
+                            If the campaign succeeds and you requested a special premium, we will disclose your email address and any premiums you requested to the campaign manager.  The manager (typically the author or publisher) will then be in touch with you about how your premiums will be fulfilled.  If you asked to be listed in the acknowledgements, this will be part of the unglued ebook.  We'll email you a link to it within 90 days of the close of the campaign.
                             </span>
                         </li>
                         
diff --git a/frontend/templates/faq_pledge_cancel.html b/frontend/templates/faq_pledge_cancel.html
index c7f96844..d69e948b 100644
--- a/frontend/templates/faq_pledge_cancel.html
+++ b/frontend/templates/faq_pledge_cancel.html
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
                     	</li>
 
 						<li class="last parent">
-							<span class="faq">Will the rights holder be notified that I have cancelled my pledge?</span>
+							<span class="faq">Will the campaign manager be notified that I have cancelled my pledge?</span>
 							<span class="menu level2 answer">
 							No, although your name will stop appearing in the list of people who have pledged to the campaign. 
 							</span>
diff --git a/frontend/templates/home.html b/frontend/templates/home.html
index 3342e4a9..a09089d7 100755
--- a/frontend/templates/home.html
+++ b/frontend/templates/home.html
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ function put_un_in_cookie2(){
                     </div>
                     <div id="js-maincontainer-faq">
                         <div class="js-maincontainer-faq-inner">
-                            Questions? Read our <a href="/faq/">general FAQ</a> or <a href="/faq/rightsholders/">FAQ for rights holders</a>.
+                            Questions? Read our <a href="/faq/">general FAQ</a> or <a href="/faq/rightsholders/">Author/Publisher FAQ</a>.
                         </div>
                     </div>
                 </div>
diff --git a/frontend/templates/notification/pledge_charged/full.txt b/frontend/templates/notification/pledge_charged/full.txt
index 5d174b37..ad5fffd8 100644
--- a/frontend/templates/notification/pledge_charged/full.txt
+++ b/frontend/templates/notification/pledge_charged/full.txt
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Thanks to you and other ungluers, {{ transaction.campaign.work.title }} will be
 Pledge summary 
 {% include "notification/pledge_summary.txt" %}    
 
-We will notify you when the unglued ebook is available for you to read.  If you've requested special premiums, the rights holder, {{ transaction.campaign.rightsholder }}, will be in touch with you via email to request any information needed to deliver your premium.
+We will notify you when the unglued ebook is available for you to read.  If you've requested special premiums, the campaign manager, {{ transaction.campaign.rightsholder }}, will be in touch with you via email to request any information needed to deliver your premium.
 
 If you'd like to visit the campaign page, click here: 
 https://{{ current_site.domain }}{% url work transaction.campaign.work.id %}
diff --git a/frontend/templates/notification/pledge_charged/notice.html b/frontend/templates/notification/pledge_charged/notice.html
index bb8128d4..5f884b19 100644
--- a/frontend/templates/notification/pledge_charged/notice.html
+++ b/frontend/templates/notification/pledge_charged/notice.html
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 		Amount pledged: {{ transaction.amount|intcomma }}<br />
 		Premium: {{ transaction.premium.description }} <br />
 		</p>
-		<p>We will notify you when the unglued ebook is available for you to read.  If you've requested special premiums, the rights holder, {{ transaction.campaign.rightsholder }}, will be in touch with you via email to request any information needed to deliver your premium.
+		<p>We will notify you when the unglued ebook is available for you to read.  If you've requested special premiums, the campaign manager, {{ transaction.campaign.rightsholder }}, will be in touch with you via email to request any information needed to deliver your premium.
 		</p>
 		<p>For more information, visit the  visit the <a href="{% url work transaction.campaign.work.id %}">campaign page</a>.
 		
diff --git a/frontend/templates/notification/pledge_failed/notice.html b/frontend/templates/notification/pledge_failed/notice.html
index e32aef1e..bf07367d 100644
--- a/frontend/templates/notification/pledge_failed/notice.html
+++ b/frontend/templates/notification/pledge_failed/notice.html
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 		Amount pledged: {{ transaction.amount|intcomma }}<br />
 		Premium: {{ transaction.premium.description }} <br />
 		</p>
-		<p>We will notify you when the unglued ebook is available for you to read.  If you've requested special premiums, the rights holder, {{ transaction.campaign.rightsholder }}, will be in touch with you via email to request any information needed to deliver your premium.
+		<p>We will notify you when the unglued ebook is available for you to read.  If you've requested special premiums, the campaign manager, {{ transaction.campaign.rightsholder }}, will be in touch with you via email to request any information needed to deliver your premium.
 		</p>
 		<p>For more information, visit the  visit the <a href="{% url work transaction.campaign.work.id %}">campaign page</a>.
 		
diff --git a/frontend/templates/press_new.html b/frontend/templates/press_new.html
index bea2eb17..26dfa188 100644
--- a/frontend/templates/press_new.html
+++ b/frontend/templates/press_new.html
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 <a id="overview"></a><h2>Overview</h2>
 <dl>
 <dt>What?</dt>
-<dd>Unglue.it offers a win-win solution to readers, who want to read and share their favorite books conveniently, and rights holders, who want to be rewarded for their work.<br /><br />
+<dd>Unglue.it offers a win-win solution to readers, who want to read and share their favorite books conveniently, and rights holders (authors, publishers, etc.), who want to be rewarded for their work.<br /><br />
 We run <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Crowdfunding">crowdfunding</a> campaigns to raise money for specific, already-published books.  When we reach goals set by the rights holders, we'll pay them to unglue their work.  They'll issue an electronic edition with a <a href="http://creativecommons.org">Creative Commons</a> license as specified during the campaign.  These licenses will make the edition free and legal for everyone to read, copy, and share, worldwide.<br /><br />
 
 At Unglue.it, book lovers can pledge money to support these campaigns; add books to their wishlist to tell the world about their favorites; discuss their favorite books; share their Unglue.it pages via social media; and find direct links to public domain and unglued ebooks that they can read right away.
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ For more background, read our president Eric Hellman's thoughts on <a href="http
 <dt>Where?</dt>
 <dd>Gluejar is a New Jersey corporation, but its employees and contractors live and work across North America.  The best way to contact us is by email, <a href="mailto:press@gluejar.com">press@gluejar.com</a>.</dd>
 <dt>What does it cost?</dt>
-<dd>Unglue.it is free to join and explore.  Supporters pledge money only if they choose to support campaigns, and the amount is up to them.  They are charged only if the campaigns reach their goal price.  Unglue.it takes a small percentage from successful campaigns, with the remainder going to the rights holders.</dd>
+<dd>Unglue.it is free to join and explore.  Supporters pledge money only if they choose to support campaigns, and the amount is up to them.  They are charged only if the campaigns reach their goal price.  Unglue.it takes a small percentage from successful campaigns, with the remainder going to the author, publisher, or other rights holder.</dd>
 <dt>What's your technology?</dt>
 <dd>Unglue.it is built using <a href="http://python.org/">Python</a> and the <a href="https://www.djangoproject.com/">Django framework</a>.  We use data from the <a href="http://code.google.com/apis/books/docs/v1/getting_started.html">Google Books</a>, <a href="http://openlibrary.org/developers/api">Open Library</a>, <a href="http://www.librarything.com/api">LibraryThing</a>, and <a href="http://www.goodreads.com/api">GoodReads</a> APIs; we appreciate that they've made these APIs available, and we're returning the favor with <a href="/api/help">our own API</a>.  You're welcome to use it.  We use <a href="http://lesscss.org/">Less</a> to organize our CSS.  We process pledges with <a href="https://payments.amazon.com/">Amazon Payments</a>.  We collaborate on our code at <a href="https://github.com/">GitHub</a> and deploy to the cloud with <a href="http://aws.amazon.com/ec2/">Amazon EC2</a>.</dd>
 <dt>How does the license work?  Why did you choose this license?</dt>